Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

 
©2009 *MeganBrianna
:iconmeganbrianna:

Artist's Comments

This is more of a practice of layering 2 photos, and earlier form of the idea for "Joe"...what do you think of the effect? What can I do to make it better?

comments always welcome! thanks :)

Critiques


Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 1 1 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconinfraredman:
i think it works really, really well

the only way that i can see that it could be improved is slightly changing the contrast or brightness of the writing just in some areas so that it was a little more easy to read in the darker areas of the portrait background. Don't get me wrong, it is quite readable, just thinking if there was any way that it could possibly be improved that's all i can think of...
great job
:iconmeganbrianna:
thank you for your response! now I'll try to figure out how to do that...

Details

October 29
2.5 MB
255 KB
900×1147

Statistics

2
3 [who?]
312 (0 today)
4 (0 today)

Camera Data

SONY
DSLR-A350
1/8 second
F/11.0
55 mm
200
Oct 13, 2008, 7:05:20 PM

Share

Link
Embed
Thumb

Site Map